Dangerous Beauty – DivX Version (Normal Quality), iPod/iPhone Version
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IMDB rating: 7.00 Plot: In 16th century Venice, courtesans enjoy unique privileges: dressed richly in red, they read, compose poetry and music, and discuss affairs of state with the men who govern the Republic. When Veronica Franco comes of age, she cannot marry Marco Venier, whom she loves, because she is well born but penniless. Her choice: cloister or courtesan. She steels her heart, and with beauty and intelligence becomes the best. She’s a heroine when she helps convince France to aid Venice in war with Turkey, but when plague descends, the Church charges her with witchcraft. At her inquisition, she must match wits with an old rival, speak for all women, and call courage from Venier. |
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Actors: Sewell Rufus,Platt Oliver,Ward Fred,Krabbe Jeroen,Lapaine Daniel,Weber Jake,Dutton Simon,Russell Grant,Biography,Drama,Romance,
What do you think of my writing?
I was playing a game online and they wanted me to write about my characters blood lines…and this just came to mind. Tell me what you think, please! Criticism is welcomed, it only makes me better! (:
Many years ago there was a battle between two creatures-one vampire and one werewolf. They had both been going to feed among a human that lay limp -sleeping-, in an alleyway.
The humans scent was so strong neither of the creatures could resist.
But amongst their plan they ran into one another, and had to fight for the prey. What they didn’t know, was that the reason the human was so luring to them was because of a scientist that had been studying of such creatures as them. He’d set up a trap.
As the two creatures fought to the death, the scientist waited until they were both at their weakest state, when he shot a special bullet he had created for this very night.
He took them, feed them human blood from near hospitals, studied them, and decided they could be harmless. He continued collecting creatures until he had the perfect mixture.
The scientist had made a body in the shape of a human, a female. He injected blood from each of the creatures he’d captured -vampire, werewolf, witch, and angel. The female came to life. Stuck in a cage, she was as dangerous as others -if not more.
Over time the new being learned from the scientist and the creatures he had taken, she became the very powerful, and with practice could shape-shift into anything, and move things with her mind.
Over time she learned to somewhat control her need for human blood, and settled for dragon blood instead of eating dragon as most witches would
She stood at five foot nine, pure muscle and beauty about her. Long, black hair reached down to her waist, her piercing eyes changed colors according to her mood. Coming from the back of her shoulders and curled down her sides almost to her feet were gorgeous wings in a dark grey tint. The edges matched her eyes as they changed. Her wings came from the angel, she uses them for protection and flight.
What was unexpected to both her and the creatures was that the scientist had her created not simply for experiment, but was paid to made her to protect a high and powerful mortal.
Also, I have an idea of what I’m gunna do if I conintue this so I need help with a title. Thanks!
This leans a whole lot towards science fiction with touches of fantasy. Did you intend on making this into a book? If so, I really don’t think you should.
For this reason:
I’m so sorry (I can tell you thought on this for a while), but this is much, much too out-there, too original for it’s own good. It would be one of those mass-market paperbacks that you have to pay to publish and just fit on shelves collecting dust.
You have a great, imaginative mind, but you must refrain from wandering too far.
I’m going to hint at Phylicia’s comment:
You do not want to sound like Twilight at all if you want to entertain a wide audience outside of shrieking fangirls. Originality is key.
Alexis B | Nov 14, 2009
That sounds like a good book.
I_love_books | Nov 14, 2009
This is really good, mind answering mine? http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index; _ylt=At2SFFPcNi2wzajwcnRVAJfsy6IX;_ylv=3 ?qid=20091114173828AABJIxt
Please and Thank You!
Tyler England | Nov 14, 2009
good! add more, send it to a publisher and make it a book series! Like the twilight series and make it like a whatever series you want but the real thing that is something to work on is to use more detail and descriptive writing! otherwise its AMAZING!!! keep up the good work!
Phylicia | Nov 14, 2009
really good.
Elle | Nov 14, 2009
I love how your so descriptive and you have a really strong writing voice.
Even though I don’t usually read books like that it’s still great.
You’ll probably get a huge group of readers since vampires are what everyone likes reading about these days.
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